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Inspired by is an understatement

That was the comic! For a first it's alright but I doubt it'll pass because of the minimal amount of actual animation.

Too much tweening

You need to lay off the tweens sometimes, your text and characters just kind of warped into the stage. For a first time submission it's not bad looking but the tweening needs to be cut down a little or done better so it can be more natural.

For a first video, this is great

Really well done for a first video. It did have the movie trailer vibe down. A few animations were kind of wonky here and there but a great first video none the less.

7/10

Absolutely wonderful

Your artwork is astounding, I've been playing it a lot and I must say your rendition of such a classic story is amazing. You deserve the five vote and ten stars.

This game is absolutely amazing

It's perfection, it has cured my cancer and gave me great strength. Thanks Miami Shark!

Work on it a lot more

You still need a lot of work before it can get by without being blammed, for one thing there is no way to go back from your instructions page (it doesn't even have relevant instructions to how to play the game.) You need a purpose to the game you just have one track and the car you control there is no motive to play, no competition or anything. Also the art needs a lot of work your car was not very car like at all. Sorry if I seem harsh as I haven't submitted anything either but you need a lot more work to pass.