Your artwork is astounding, I've been playing it a lot and I must say your rendition of such a classic story is amazing. You deserve the five vote and ten stars.
You need to lay off the tweens sometimes, your text and characters just kind of warped into the stage. For a first time submission it's not bad looking but the tweening needs to be cut down a little or done better so it can be more natural.
You still need a lot of work before it can get by without being blammed, for one thing there is no way to go back from your instructions page (it doesn't even have relevant instructions to how to play the game.) You need a purpose to the game you just have one track and the car you control there is no motive to play, no competition or anything. Also the art needs a lot of work your car was not very car like at all. Sorry if I seem harsh as I haven't submitted anything either but you need a lot more work to pass.
Really well done for a first video. It did have the movie trailer vibe down. A few animations were kind of wonky here and there but a great first video none the less.
Stickman videos are always entertaining and there is a lot of talent here.
The soundtrack was very well chosen for the action on screen so 10/10 there
Character identifiability was great, though everyone is a stick figure each one stood out enough to not get mistaken for another, not just in color but style of fighting and power. 10/10
The animation goes well with the name of the group, they're fluid and very well executed 10/10
I really liked how this was done, it had great animation and a perfectly chosen soundtrack. But my problems with it come from the completely strange storyline, it took Pico and made him into an anime character then threw in some jokes like the over 9000 etc.
The animations were absolutely phenomenal.
10/10
The storyline was strange and out of place with the Pico storyline so it's a
6/10
The soundtrack worked perfectly so it's also a
10/10
and Nene was very dude like as others have pointed out.
I've watched this multiple times on other sites and have always loved the charm of having the creation vs the creator and the only bad thing about it is it ends too soon. The animations are very well done and the usage of the desktop and Flash interfaces are great. Very well deserving of its 9/10
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All 11 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 23, 2009
Absolutely wonderful
Your artwork is astounding, I've been playing it a lot and I must say your rendition of such a classic story is amazing. You deserve the five vote and ten stars.
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 8, 2009
This game is absolutely amazing
It's perfection, it has cured my cancer and gave me great strength. Thanks Miami Shark!
Rated 3 / 5 stars May 23, 2009
Inspired by is an understatement
That was the comic! For a first it's alright but I doubt it'll pass because of the minimal amount of actual animation.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 23, 2009
Too much tweening
You need to lay off the tweens sometimes, your text and characters just kind of warped into the stage. For a first time submission it's not bad looking but the tweening needs to be cut down a little or done better so it can be more natural.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars May 23, 2009
Work on it a lot more
You still need a lot of work before it can get by without being blammed, for one thing there is no way to go back from your instructions page (it doesn't even have relevant instructions to how to play the game.) You need a purpose to the game you just have one track and the car you control there is no motive to play, no competition or anything. Also the art needs a lot of work your car was not very car like at all. Sorry if I seem harsh as I haven't submitted anything either but you need a lot more work to pass.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 19, 2009
For a first video, this is great
Really well done for a first video. It did have the movie trailer vibe down. A few animations were kind of wonky here and there but a great first video none the less.
7/10
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 15, 2009
Great Collab
Stickman videos are always entertaining and there is a lot of talent here.
The soundtrack was very well chosen for the action on screen so 10/10 there
Character identifiability was great, though everyone is a stick figure each one stood out enough to not get mistaken for another, not just in color but style of fighting and power. 10/10
The animation goes well with the name of the group, they're fluid and very well executed 10/10
Great job guys, hope to see another collab soon!
Rated 4 / 5 stars May 3, 2009
Excellent job on your animation but a few WTF's
I really liked how this was done, it had great animation and a perfectly chosen soundtrack. But my problems with it come from the completely strange storyline, it took Pico and made him into an anime character then threw in some jokes like the over 9000 etc.
The animations were absolutely phenomenal.
10/10
The storyline was strange and out of place with the Pico storyline so it's a
6/10
The soundtrack worked perfectly so it's also a
10/10
and Nene was very dude like as others have pointed out.
All in all a great but slightly flawed work.
8/10
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 3, 2009
Great job! Very funny and well done animation.
I really liked this one, it had a great premise, animation and a good sense of humor.
The art style was really well done too and coupled with the great animation it's well worth its high score.
Great job and keep it up man.
10/10
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 2, 2009
A classic
I've watched this multiple times on other sites and have always loved the charm of having the creation vs the creator and the only bad thing about it is it ends too soon. The animations are very well done and the usage of the desktop and Flash interfaces are great. Very well deserving of its 9/10